Tuesday, October 03, 2006

Part 2: Chapter 2

    At roughly this time, Nakajima was in the CAI room of Jusho High, facing the Host Computer which was connected via a modem to the outside, and trying to talk to Loki.
    "So what's the story? Did the movement experiment work?"
    "I suppose it would be best to say that it showed some results--at least to an extent." The low, rumbling voice that came out of the speakers shook Nakajima's very bowels. Nakajima did not know that Loki had already achieved the ability to take form on his own. He thought the "results to an extent" meant that Loki could exist inside another computer as an AI construct.
    "So, I guess you have no choice but to recognize how good my technology is?"
    "If that's what you want to think, go ahead. But let me just say that we're a long way from perfection."
    "Well, that's to be expected. When trying to send that much information in a single burst, there's bound to be some data loss." Sweat glistened off of Nakajima's forehead where his microphone headset gripped his temples. Nakajima continued to talk with a calm and disinterested air, but his entire body, stiff with tension, belied a hint of uneasiness in a corner of his mind.
    What will happen if Loki gains the ability to take form? Nakajima asked himself, ignorant of the true situation.
    No, that's impossible. Just look, Loki is dutifully obeying me in these demon transfer theory tests.
    Demon Transfer Theory.
    Gaining the ability to move freely about the earth had been a dream of demons for aeons, not just Loki. Since ancient times, the areas in which a demon could appear on the earth had been extremely limited. Furthermore, once a demon had actually been summoned, it could only hold form within a radius of a few kilometers from the point it was called to. It could easily be said that this was the reason why Earth had gone for so long without seeing an demon invasion.
    Nakajima had created a technology that turned what was once common knowledge in the demon world upside-down. This technology would digitize a demon and transfer it to other computers over communication lines. If perfected, it would completely remove the physical restrictions on demon movement on Earth.
    Nakajima thought that his experiment had finally succeeded. He was naive in his line of thought. To start with, he was just an ordinary high school student who had never made contact with a demon at all before, yet here he was immediately jumping to deal with an incredibly powerful demon lord like Loki, which could very well lead to tragedy. Still, one could say that he was being prudent and showing forethought by realizing the danger that Loki could pose, should he gain the ability to gain form.
    I may end up having to summon another powerful demon from the Atziluth World that can counteract Loki.
    Unable to suppress his growing uneasiness, Nakajima started pondering walking down an even more dangerous road when a voice suddenly surged out of the speakers.
    "Give me Shirasagi Yumiko."
    "What!?"
    "Give me Shirasagi Yumiko."
    "No. I can't do that." The instant he heard Yumiko's name, Nakajima cried out. Even he was surprised by his own reaction.
    "Child, who do you think you're ordering here!?" Loki's voice displayed an anger he had never shown before. The machine let out a strange whine, and sparks flew from where the cables connected to it.
    "All right, all right, calm down..." Nakajima folded to Loki's threat with no resistance at all. Angry at himself, Nakajima bit down on his lip, almost enough to produce blood, and an image of Yumiko's face hovered in his mind. Once again, he was pulled into an illusion.

    The towering rocky mountains and azure skies were not visible to the youth. His narrow eyes were fixated grimly on the track ahead of him. His parched, earthen-colored lips were encrusted with red-and black dried blood. His feet were swollen and purple, with sharp shards of rock embedded in them. However, the sound of the gasps drawing close behind him made his injured feet speed up his pace even more.
    "Izanagi, why won't you wait? Is it because I've become so hideous? You promised me when I entered Yomi that you would bring me back, no matter what happened to me! Was that a lie? I would never run from you, no matter what happened to you!"
    "Forgive me..." As if trying to flee from his fear and guilt, the youth clenched his teeth and took off. But the woman's tenacity was slowly bridging the gap between them. The woman's tears, falling from eyes with their lids rotted off, dropped to the ground with her hair as she cried out.
    "Izanagi..."
    As she cried out, the hole in her cheek became larger and larger, until her white molars were fully exposed. Soon the path ended, and the youth could see a wide expanse of shadowy wetlands in front of him.
    "I made it back to Toyoashihara..." His lips trembled with relief. Opening his arms wide, the youth took a deep breath of the humid air, pursed his lips forcefully, turned around, and sat down.
    For a while, he stared at the form of the grotesque woman chasing him, then shook his head sadly and closed his eyes.
    The youth started to meditate. When the woman had gotten within reach of a stone's throw, his body seemed to float slightly in midair for a moment, and then there was a huge undulation in the atmosphere. As if a huge invisible power had been released, the earth shook, and the fissure that appeared directly beneath the youth spread to the surrounding moutains, and countless rocks started to fall on the path. As the woman stopped, a giant boulder rolled in front of the path in front of her eyes, sealing it off.
    "Izanagi! I will come to you! Even if it takes hundreds or thousands of years!" The sound of the woman's bitter cries rose from beyond the towering pile of earth.
    "Forgive me, Izanami..." Plugging his ears with his hands, the youth staggered into the wetlands, the tall reeds rising even above his height.

    As Nakajima snapped out of his trance, he left the CAI room in low spirits, and a few minutes later, as if waiting for him to leave a dark shadow slipped through the hallway and into the room. Two hands reached out of the inky blackness, searching for the power switch to a terminal, and soon the light of a display was illuminating fingers on the keyboard.
    They were white, smooth fingers. Soon they stopped moving at the coercing sound of a low voice.
    "OHARA." That was what the voice said.
    "I'm showing you the list for the transport program Nakajima wrote. Can you operate it?"
    "I think I can operate it, but not much more than that."
    "That's fine. There's no more need for any changes to the technology. If I can move and take form on my own, I can conquer the Assiah world singlehandedly."
    "Your will be done." The microphone picked up the excited whisper.

9 comments:

Jkarofwild said...

"The plot thickens..."
"No, soup thickens. The plot deepens."

Anonymous said...

I actually jumped for joy, although the morbidity of the story is really strong. Oh well, what else should I expect with a SMT story.

Guestron said...

I just wanted to give you an immense thanks for your work. I hope you dont mind but I have put a link to your site on my own electronic journal.

Thanks again

Anonymous said...

Im really liking this i can't wait for more. I havn't found a book i've liked in forever.

Masakado said...

Just a note to anyone who's reading this...

The next chapter is probably not going to be for a while. It's Part 3, which consists of one gigantic chapter. (As a point of comparison, it's slightly less than half as much text as everything I've translated up until now)

Eyeballing it it looks a little less than 30 pages. I can translate roughly about 3-4 pages per hour but I usually only get an hour or two per day at most to translate. So it probably won't be up until late next week at the earliest.

Anonymous said...

I must say, as a huge fan of Nocturne, it was awesome to run into this. I can only hope and pray that you have the guts to see it through, as it is a big project..if you can do it, kudos to you! (Not too mention, I want you to do it, because at this point, im hooked)

Masakado said...

Thanks for the words of encouragement, and I'm glad everyone seems to enjoy it--kind of makes the effort worthwhile. Plus, it's been great for improving my vocabulary as well. :)

As to whether or not I have the guts to see it through--we'll see. :) I bet I'll be at least able to get through the first book, I'm already nearly halfway done.

Laura said...

i am so glad you did this :D
YAY

Anonymous said...

Up to this point, I was feeling Nakajima was irreedeemable, as a human being. Even if bullying made him pull the trigger on summoning a demon, and even if, as it looks to me, he was groomed by the one behind the CRAFT AI to develop an unprecedented demon summoning method for his own ends.

But this chapter made me understand the genius behind the concept of him being the reincarnation of Izanagi. Izanagi went into Yomi (Hell) for his dead wife, and discovering she had become a hideous monster, he escapes, and seals off the path between the world of the living and the underworld, leaving her there, with only the other dark creatures as company. And now we have his re-incarnation, opening the path to the world of the living for these dark creatures. In a way, he is undoing what he did on his previous life, because he still has this unresolved trauma, of failing to bring Izanami back, and this story is him, with the assistence of Yumiko, getting closure for that.

I only realized this as I wrote this comment, but if before it was Izanami who was left in a world of dark creatures by Izanagi, now it's Nakajima who is surrounded by dark creatures - Loki, Kerberus - when Yumiko meets him.